ROSE BUD FAIRY
Home nestled in a garden of roses,
soft petals would lay under her feet.
Flits from flower to flower each day,
collecting nectar fragrant and sweet.
Rose bud fairy, alluring and wee,
collects nectar in her magic wand.
Her beauty surpasses all splendor,
throughout the kingdom and beyond.
Enticing you with all her sweetness,
hypnotize you with bee's honeycomb.
Cast her spell on pixies and elves,
rosebud fairy mesmerised the gnomes.
Rules the rose garden with fragrance,
wee creatures did not stand a chance.
Waves her magic wand of nectar around,
neath moonlight she made them dance.
The forest, romantic place to live,
rose bud fairy created much love.
Sprinkles sweet fairy dust in the air
she made happiness rain from above.
In a list
A contest entry
- Flower Fairies (PIF) by Pandorea.
330 points, ended September 1, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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What an imagination
This is a wonderful poem, it comes from the heart
I just love fairies, they set my imagination going
Love Light and Peace
Nansie
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roses are such gorgeous flowers...and their fairy sounds it too!
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love all the mention of spells, it paints a real picture of where this fairy resides
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Worthwhile the view and read, sis as always..Such a feminine genteel way you have presented the picture and portrayal of this rose bud fairy...in that magical world of faeries, this time in the rose garden....Beautiful write of rhyme, and flow as well!
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Good Morning
Thank you so much Rose for this lovely coment. Always so nice when you stop by and read. You take care.
Sandy
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This is captivating and a wonderful trip into fantasy. The narrator leads the reader into a lovely trip through gardens so fragrant with nectars so sweet and beauty that entices the eyes that gathers in the sights. The rhyme is nice and hold the quatrain together, leading the reader forward to stroll slowly through this work.
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Wonderful coment
Well so glad you enjoyed the stroll through my poem my friend.
Happy to have you.
This was a fun write. I have been trying to stay away from those sad poems.
A delightful comment!! Hugs and Smiles. Take care.
Blessings, Sandy
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Superb
Ah, 'tis a fine write, indeed. Quite charming without a doubt. Imagery,rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us. -
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Thank You!!
Well Hello,
Thank you for this very nice comment. Always enjoy when you stop by. Glad you enjoyed reading it. Hope you have a great week ahead. You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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You are quite welcome. I shall, and hope that you do also.
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