Cruel hands of fate
She gives then takes
Uncaring of all the scares
What once was mine
Only in my mind
There are no guarantees
My wounded soul
Burdens I bear
Within my shattered heart
Condemned to live,condemned to be, alone within this world
A contest entry
- PIF Pic prompt :Because I feel the need for another contest by Rclane.
475 points, ended September 7, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Short yet powerful conveyance of the emptiness of loneliness and one could very well feel condemned to live.....Thank you for your entry. Best of luck to you in contest.
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Excellent!
I really like this, it's short and to the point. It speaks volumes and yet says so little. I love you line " Condemned to live". Excellent word choice! You have penned a magnificent write!
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awww wow, this has a sort of void feeling to it. terrific job though and good luck
Stephanie ♥
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