Those who come to this page
and leave in a rage
seeking a sage
to tell them what happened.
Must be confused
of how this site is used
As they silently cruised
through my writing.
As people come to write
they recieve quite a fright
when they see things of lies they all but turn white
Realize it's exactly about them.
Just accept that it's true
A few are about you
and wrong that you've done, too
that's how I felt, get over it.
Of course I won't deny
just explain with a sigh
I did not go awry
needed to escape, what did you think?
Getting angrier still
sweat beads on your brow
demanding explinations of where why and how
Aren't you getting tired yet?
As you demand still why,
though I did not lie
I need to explain again:
I felt it in my mind
I needed to unwind
or I'd explode undefined
That's why I write poetry.
Author notes
Anyone get the wrong idea with my poetry, about them? deal with it.
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yeah. I know I have to edit. Just was a spur of the moment thing, I'll ge tmor einto it when I have time.
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God, that's something I should write!
Everything you've said here, I feel too.
(Although, I wouldn't use the phrase 'have a cow!')
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Lol,
Nice ryhming technique.
Sort of put me in the mind of like you were telling someone off here.
Or like you were venting out.
Which is always a good thing to do at times
because you don't wanna keep it bottled up.
Great job here.
-Mandi
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Haha, nice monologue: humorous and somewhat to the point
The rhymes were a great touch to this and the lines were written with simplicity and straightforwardly, indeed ~ -
Lol... This must be one of the most curious views on AP... Congrats on shocking me 1 time
personally I rate that the poem is cool. Certain parts need to be checked up for rythm but otherwise its a sweet treat
Congrats
Keep Writing
Ditt0
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Nice write. Like the rhyming as well as the poem itself. It felt almost like a rap at times because of the tight rhyming and rhythm. Nice write.
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