Upon centre stage,
awaiting;
soft curtains
of dreams
rustle and sway
from nudging genesis.
Aurora,
in captivating flamboyance,
dismisses ebony's mantle,
flouting splendour
of her enduring passage,
in glorious distinction.
Author notes
Prompt - Dawn
30 words exactly
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie...................... 15/30/24 Word Prompt PIF by fortyninereasons.
875 points, ended August 27, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i used to go out with dawn, but she was always singing, so i chucked her, now i am seeing dusk. a good poem.
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A pleasure to read. Well done and best of luck in the contest.
Slayer -
'Aurora' just got me, being a girl from 'down under' I do like how this flows and evokes the thoughts it evokes. Thank you for entering.
Juls
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So hard to write with so little word usage... this is good tho. Thanks for sharing
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this is very good, i really enjoyed your wording and the flow, i think the italics helps alot. good luck and take care
Stephanie ♥
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