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Fork in the road

The honest truth
is which
when met with a fork in the road
most of us fear the unknown of both
and just turn back.

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  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    January 21, 2009

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    Good one!

    I'd like to offer a suggestion:

    The honest truth is
    when we meet
    with a fork in the road
    most of us fear the unknown
    of both choices
    and just turn back.

    Nice topic for a thirteen year old to think about!


  • luna-midnight silver member
    August 25, 2008

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    awww, this is really true, terrific simple yet complex write. it lets the reader wonder onto their own path and think.
    keep writting and take care
    Stephanie ♥