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Promise to you my love

To the one i love
When i'm with you i feel complete
My life, my very existance makes sense
Holding your hand brings me great joy
It's the simple things in life
That make me love you
The way i feel secure
In your loving tender embrace
The way my troubles melt
When you lift my chin with your hand and kiss me
When, no matter how bad my day has been,
You can always put a smile on my face
These simple things make me feel
For you like no one i've felt for before
What i have to say to you
Is simple it's true
But pay attention non the less
To what your about to hear
For what i must say is this
Through the test of time
And strife and woes
My promise to you dear
Is really quite clear
In that it is this
I loved you before
I still love you now
And i will love you until my dying day
With nothing less
And nothing more
Than a 100% unconditional guarantee

Author notes

This was written in response to the wonderful poem that my loving boyfriend wrote for me. Thank you Stuart. You are a constant inspiration in my live. Not to mention the fact that you are more than i could possible hope for yet some how your mine. I love you so much... and i just wanted you to know that
Love you Stuart

Nicole

written in response to "My Oath To Your" by: DarkKnight1990

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  • DarkKnight1990
    August 25, 2008
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    Excellent

    Great poem, also one of the best things you've done for me... I'm glad you feel that way... you know i feel the same. It makes me feel even more content with my life now to know that you love me as much as I love you...

    I love you... always will,
    Stuart
    aka
    DarkKnight1990