I write about the truth, my reality, my life
I share the inconsistencies and dissapointment in sight
But underneath the letters, phrases, and pen strokes
Live the secrets to the pain and happiness I invoke
My heart is crying and my pen soothes its ambiguous beat
But my soul creates a portrait that my words must masterpiece
Underneath every line I pour out my disgust, love, and ambition
I’m not solicitous with you, but my own apparition
My pen cries the tears that create words of hope
One day, inside myself, I’ll learn to cope
The reality is far from real, no problems exist with me
I write down the pleasures, vexations, and scrutiny
My journal, my paper, my pen, my words
My tears, my feelings, my nouns, my verbs
I can’t scream, I can’t argue, no point to curse
I’m wishing for that voyage, for that journey I thirst
“I must get away” reads my journal this day
But in my diary there’s no quest, it reads “stay”
I’m a one man island, a shell with no turtle
Do you understand me or the diary within my journal?
A contest entry
- your most very personal poetry♥ by innocence jaded.xx.
475 points, ended September 7, 2008, 62 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Do not judge me. by Serenity-words.
1800 points, ended April 19, 68 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow this was amazing, you are truly talented in writing. I love the words and the flow, and I had many many favorite parts.
Great job, and thank you for putting this into my contest.

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WOW. I loveloveLOVED this. Your use of words were just captivating in every way. You wrote it so brilliantly, and in a way that many can relate to.
-Underneath every line I pour out my disgust, love, and ambition
I’m not solicitous with you, but my own apparition
My pen cries the tears that create words of hope
One day, inside myself, I’ll learn to cope
The reality is far from real, no problems exist with me
I write down the pleasures, vexations, and scrutiny
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I can't even tell you how incredible those lines are. haha, beautiful! Thank you for entering & good luck to you !♥


