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Redemption?

I had learned so little in life:
When the calling came to unlearn everything,
I found so little to disentangle.

I had accumulated so little in life:
When the calling came to give up everything,
I found hardly anything to unload.

Oh, how I used to cling like a leech to the dead
And jump next to that never born.

Not knowing now is the beginning and the end...
Bliss with no beginning and end.

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  • MargaretG silver member
    August 25, 2008

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    I like this

    This is a delightful poem that speaks clearly and simply. We think that things are complex, that we have to do a dozen things before we can look for the one thing we need. We already have it, if we would stop and believe. I wish everyone could read this and understand it.

    • pvenugopal
      August 26, 2008
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      Thank you Margaret. I am still in a flux, at times confused, at other times quite clear-headed.