i'm scared for the death that is followed with the morning
high school
bleh
my body
is dying
i keep bleeding in my hands
i bruise so easily ]
i'm sick
for the morning is going to kill me
i'm depressed
anxious
i'm not looking forward to dying in the morning
Author notes
I'm so anxious for the morning i dont want to go back to school
A contest entry
- How does that make you feel? [options] by written-in-ink.
600 points, ended September 7, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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still think itsnice
but you got throught it right
well good luck
and thanks -
i felt just like this the night before school; i couldn't even sleep.
great work.
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sorry
nice write
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your welcome
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punctuation would make this flow so much better
but i really liked the idea behind this,
it's so true about dreading waking up in the morning, i think everyone feels like that occasionally
goodluck in the contest
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oh man I know what you mean...Its like each morning and night I get hell worried bout skool...Classes with work thats to hard, friends that hurt me...its horrible eh?
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one of my very best friends is leaving too
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hehe Thanx...the thing with my friend is that I havent been getting along with all my other friends much, the ones that have been my friendsa for a while....and me and her are just getting to be good friends...and shes leaving...brilliant! *pretend you can read the sarcasm in my typing of that last word*
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dude
master of sarcasm haha
but that sucks and i hope things get better for you -
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lol same with you(the getting better thing)
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dude
exactly!
i hate everything about school
it's just a terrible place
filled with terrible people
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ye I know! I actually do get along with a few ppl...One of ems leving next year tho
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