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U Turn

Let us turn back
Let us not cross that bridge
It might jus collapse
We shall fall so hard
That the ground we will not reach

Lest us return
Let us go back home
For crossing that bridge
Leads to a valley unknown

Let us not travel
To where we have never been
We might discover so much worse
Than what we have already seen

Let us not look back
Let us not move too far ahead
We shall discover the mysteries og life
By living for the moment

A contest entry

this is for those people who wants to live in their past or cannot wait for the future...

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  • awitersheart
    July 10
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    Awesome

    I love this poem, there was a bridge when I was a kid that was falling a part, and so old it was roped off but it never stopped me from always being curious of it.
    and one day I just had to cross it, I think more because of the danger in it, and I ended up braking my arm
    This is an awesome poem I truly enjoyed it thank you for sharing this with us all


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    August 29, 2008

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    Thanks a lot for taking the time
    to write for my contest. I appreciate it
    and wish you the best of luck with it
    here!




    Jeremy0826