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Floor 'em

An expert at failure was set to the task
of policing thought though nobody had asked
her expert opinion of what they believed
she thought they expressed when she asked them to leave.

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"Sarcasm: the last refuge of modest and chaste-souled people when the privacy of their soul is coarsely and intrusively invaded." - Fyodor Dostoevsky

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  • daviscth silver member
    September 10, 2008

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    Congrats on your HM with this piece. It may be short but your words overflow with imagery.

  • Uriah Hamilton
    September 3, 2008
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    the private soul needs such protection.

  • Judith Chandler
    September 3, 2008

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    "nobody had asked her expert opinion" I have met lots of people like that!

    Like the quote from Dostoevsky and must remember it as a charitable way of thinking of the sarcastic family members and other people I have met. Myself included at times.


  • deercatcher
    August 26, 2008

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    I am like a goldfish swimming against the glass of my limitations here... My comprehension can't do this many loops...


  • toomysterious
    August 25, 2008
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    Oh, so succinctly put. Enjoyed this immensely.


  • arafura gold member
    August 25, 2008
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    Haha! Very good indeed my friend. Sort of rings a bell too.


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    August 25, 2008

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    Short and sweet. Well put and well rhymed. I like it alot.

    Could you please put the prompt that you used in your AN?

    Thanks.

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