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Levi's gift to the b-ball bouncers & various other sorts.

Denim overalls
began as a country phenomenon
now dungarees are urbanized

'Ladies' wear them low-cut
to show off their knickers

'Gentlemen' wear them low-cut
because well...
they don't give a fuck

Author notes

Prompt #2: Jeans

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  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    August 25, 2008

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    This is a great read for me this morning it made me laugh goodluck in her contest best wishes and much love always


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    August 25, 2008

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    LMFAO!!! That is freakin brilliant bro!!!!!

    Yep, the difference in the sexes aye!! lol


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    August 25, 2008

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    what?

    laughing and laughing!
    catchy tune indeed!
    your muse is sneaking out..and peek-a-boo
    we see you showing off your low cut jeans!
    Toshie teaser!
    cheek whacker!
    crack blaster!
    ears/Seattle
    gotcha!


  • Cannonsfire
    August 25, 2008
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    hahahaha...damn this is great, picture the guy I saw yesterday lol I knew he had on calvin klein undies cos there was so much of them showing...damn give me tight jeans and a firm butt any day

  • notorious gold member
    August 25, 2008
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    LMFAO

    I was never a huge fan of Levi's but they're not bad. I prefer Diesel jeans my parents would never buy me.

    GUESS? has GORGEOUS jeans.
    *off-topic*

    Well gee, anyways..."began as country phenomenon"
    Did farmers wear them or something?
    I think you're missing an article (is that the right word?) "began as A country phenomenon" has better flow to me...

    "now dungarees are urbanized"
    So many things are urbanized.
    What does 'dungarees' mean? Sounds jocular.

    "to show off their knickers"
    That is SO not true.
    Well, it is for some people.

    'Gentlemen'
    LMAO

    "they don't give a fuck"
    Well. Yes.

    Great vulgarity...LMAO

    Good luck


    • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
      August 25, 2008
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      dungarees is another word for pants. Used nowadays mostly by Aussies.

    • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
      August 25, 2008

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      Leaving out articles is a great thing about poetry. But in this case maybe you right.

      Levi Strauss invented jeans out of tent canvas, so cowboys could have something rugged to wear, way back in the 1800s.

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