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A contest entry for:
Sixains
I was reading some Shakespeare, as you do, specifically Venus and Adonis and decided I loved one aspect of the form, the rhyme scheme. It shares a beautiful device with the Shakespearian (and Eusebian) Sonnet and the Ottava R
Yea yea...You knew I would try it.
Background credit: Ap hubby Griswold thank you hon!!
A contest entry
- Sixains by cricketjeff.
1450 points, ended September 7, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Passionate and loving, rhymed and flowed as you do so well. Some wonderful imagery. Some of the couplets are quite stunning. Great stuff, a definite "Not Bad"!


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YES! Wow! see I am speechless lol you are a sensual wildfire!


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You are such a bad girl sometimes...lol
This was really good...What a way to start the morning..
Love you
Nor


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Lovely piece here
Truly sensual and with such tenderness bravo

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very nice!
Absolutely, wonderful morning breakfast!


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Wow
Very sensual..this poem has great expressions of the way mornings should begin..takes your breath away..

thanks,
Conni'


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Excellent
A very fine romantic write. Imagery, rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Again, well done. -
Beautifully done sweetheart. A wonderful way to start the morning, I like my bacon crisp anyways.
And sunny side up buns work for me too.
Love you baby...Scott


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This is marvelous, my love, very impressive, and romantic.



I love you, good luck with the contest.












