Crazy…
As a silver spoon.
Crazy…
As a golden moon.
Don’t know where I’m going,
Don’t know if you care.
If I’m going crazy,
Will you find me there?
Don’t know what your saying,
Don’t know if I hear.
If your going insane,
Then your almost there.
Don’t know what I’m thinking,
Or why I even try.
Don’t know I’m doing,
So don’t ask me why.
Crazy…
As a rocking star
Crazy…
As a shooting car
Don’t know where I’m going,
Don’t know if you care.
If I’m going crazy,
Will you find me there?
And if I’m going crazy,
Will you meet me there?
Cause if your going crazy,
I’m waiting for you there!
Do you think I’m crazy?
Do you really want to know?
If you think I’m crazy,
Then I guess I’m gonna show
Don’t know where I’m going,
Don’t know if you care.
If I’m going crazy,
Will you find me there?
I am going crazy….
Oh so crazy….
A contest entry
- your most very personal poetry♥ by innocence jaded.xx.
475 points, ended September 7, 2008, 62 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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haha. im crazy for you! this made me think of the song crazy by britney spears haha. go crazy. makes life interesting.
love,
mylee -
HAHAHAHS lol lets go crazy on the moon! this title just caught my eye, coz its crazy, and i'm crazy, and this poem was crazy and WHOA! i loved it its a fun piece keep up the penning
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Hah ! I can relate to this so much. I loved your rhyme scheme in this piece. Brilliant. & You just basically worded everything wonderfully. Thank you for the wonderful entry & I wish you the best of luck with everything ! ♥
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Very good
I can relate to this so much. I have heard these words in my heart before. I think it came for a lack of confidence. When everything I valued and trusted were being questioned and attacked I knew this poem very well. But you're PROBABLY not crazy. Tell the doubter to go to hell.
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This brought a tear in my eye. Maybe I am going a bit crazy too...see you there?
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