As I look past the cheap-colored lights
and into the distant sky,
my mind is wandering to and fro
from pain to happiness.
I pull myself past those lights
and watch the moon slowly rise,
as a stressful days ends,
and a restful night begins.
I look back within my heart,
but that too is tinted by murky light,
that is covering it strangely,
almost slicing it in two
A contest entry
- How does that make you feel? [options] by written-in-ink.
600 points, ended September 7, 2008, 13 entries
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I look back within my heart,
but that too is tinted by murky light,
that is covering it strangely,
almost slicing it in two
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very nice way to capture that
i really liked this
good job
thank you and good luck -
I look back within my heart,
but that too is tinted by murky light,
that is covering it strangely,
almost slicing it in two
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i loved that part!
the iamgery was beautiful
this was a really good write
best of luck in the contest
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