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An Altar

A purity breathes in an absolute beautiful sphere,
the sun left the solitude gilded to the serene sky,
to chant hymns of spirituality among sentinel trees.

Within orange pale bright ambiance, love essences float,
in an untouched zephyr's phenomena of auspicious mood,
to meditate on an image showering an innocent existence.

The kidding wooden beam cover the spaces in black shades,
a loneliness as sadness longing to entrance transcendence,
in a profound depth to scream silently that "You are just you.'

An altar in accordance with nature turns as grey inhabitant,
to welcome the bright twilight inheriting a softness mental,
to sing in scintillating waves of my abundant love for you.









Author notes

~spiritualangel~

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Credit: Photo by Danny
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  • Maggie Kay
    June 11

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    wonderful imagry overall a wonderful poem thanks for entering
    kmp


  • Riftkin gold member
    April 16

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    Best of luck in my contest..
    This is just the first time looking at all
    the poems in my contest .. please do not respond.

    Riftkin


  • Lyndon gold member
    January 16

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    Wonderful

    dear Winkler, to see that you will be published with "The Altar" in Kevin's anthology. Congratulations, Ron.


  • Harrisham Minhas
    December 31, 2008

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    A wonderful take on the picture prompt.
    Congrats on the Gold.


  • Bean Sidhe silver member
    November 7, 2008

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    What beautiful imagery! I can certainly see why you've won a gold with this gem.

    Thank you for your entry & good luck~


  • Crazy Coconut
    September 8, 2008
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    beautiful imagery and wonderful poem. congratulations on the gold, certainly well deserved !


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    August 25, 2008

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    Oh wow this is just gorgeous! Your imagery and connection to the photo are wonderful.I love that title to
    Thank you so much for your entry
    gaylene

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