i'm wishing you weren't part of my past.
my head is spinning with what could have
been. we could have been the envy of every
couple, as if we werent before we were dating.
baby, we had it all.
it's not as easy as i thought to put you out of
my mind. espcially since even the rain makes my
eyes sparkle with tears. we should've been the
opposite of what people tried to make us up to
be.
we were almost there; almost perfect.
the coolness of water when it touches my lips
scarily reminds me of the way the only thing
that warmed your body was my skin against yours.
my lips against yours... my heartbeat in sync
with yours.
people thought we were imaginary the way were placed
together perfectly like pieces to a puzzle. even the
way your hand fit perfectly in mine felt like it was
meant to be that way.
but it wasnt, was it?
you made it clear that love never wanted me.
Author notes
ugh...i'm okay at writing love poems idk why. but i guess i've experienced it enough that by the time i'm 30 i'll be a pro. it took little to write this. just because these are the words i'll never say... outloud anyway.
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Comments
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well, this is a love story I'm sure a few people could relate to. especially movie people stars, or popular kids in high school. It is a sad reality that we live in sometimes, I do like this poem it something someone could read over and over again. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. UNT
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I liked this piece. It reminds me of older poems I used to write a couple years ago. I also used mt username in my poems a lot as well, i.e. perfect, perfectly, etc. My old username used to be Perfectly Ruined, so I used that word a lot as well. I thought the flow of this was good and the imagery was nice. Keep up the good work and good luck in the contest.
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