They moved her to a home for the aging,
Ms. Lexie went along, screaming and raging.
She had five children, all grown,
with children and families of their own.
And for her, their life, they weren't rearranging.
Ms. Lexie settled in right away,
it wasn't a bad place to stay.
Then something went wrong,
and she began to long...
for a man with whom she could lay.
Her eldest received the call first,
answered the phone, expecting the worst.
"Come right away",
the doctor did say...
before into laughter he bursts.
"I'm sorry to say, there's been a mistake,
it seems some Viagra, your mother did take"
"Now she's attacking old man George,
down in room forty-four...
she gave him sleeping pills and he's not awake!
A contest entry
- Laugh out Loud by Florida Sunshine.
525 points, ended September 12, 2008, 26 entries
Silver trophy winner
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OOOOOOOOO!!!!!! FUNNY!!!!! DIRTY BUT FUNNY!!!! LOL!!!!!!!! I loved the limrick setting btw. ^_^
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{giggling uncontrollably} STOP IT! STOP IT!
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Oh my god! funny as heck! l.o.l. very entertaining piece! l.o.l. i loved it! thanks for the laugh!
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thank you
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You must be talking about my momma... cause only my momma would make that kind of 'mistake'! ~ Very funny~ I enjoyed the style of the write... along with the storyline. ~ Enjoyable read from start t finish. ~
Thanks so much for sharing this with me~ It was my pleasure to read and review your work~
Best of luck to you,
Florida Sunshine
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thanks for the silver, sis, hope it gave you a laugh
Sassy
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wow... lol.. that was funny.. You always think it the other way around.. jejeje..
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LOL Very funny. Poor old man George being attack by a little old lady. LOL. How many times do you think this actually happens? Great write.
Brian
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