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Promises kept

 

Words of love exchanged and promises made

Interrupted by the unexpected hands of fate

Leaving two hearts silently waiting

Always together yet always apart

I still feel the same though you’re far away

Your name I hear whispered on the wind

And I promise you….

 

Forever love

 

 

Author notes

"as promised"
for "him" as always

Inspired by Reba McEntire's Forever Love

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  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    September 19, 2008

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    Promises made to the one you love...whispers softly heard upon the gentle winds...i shall love you forever...sighs...yet another beauty for your hetane dear sister


    • freespirit51
      September 19, 2008
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      Tender wolf

      I am glad you enjoyed for I know that he would as well..Naish dear sister


  • Flowergirl
    August 31, 2008
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    that is great and the background is very cool i love all of it great write keep it up....


  • x0charlie-redhead0x
    August 26, 2008

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    This poem expresses a deep passion for someone, and it is sad to be torn apart by uncontrollable circumstances.

    and *spellcheck* its your, not you're
    overall great job!

    • freespirit51
      August 27, 2008
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      charlie-redhead

      Thanks so much for your very special words and you are very right as to the emotions and feelings in the poem. Glad it touched you.


  • Nicada silver member
    August 26, 2008

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    This is so very sad, but also so very beautiful. Your words here are stunning, and this is a powerful testimony to true love. Nice job on this poem! Blessings, Patty


    • freespirit51
      August 26, 2008
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      paw-writer

      thanks for the kind words. I am always proud to write about my Hetane. Glad you enjoyed it.


  • Angelflower
    August 26, 2008

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    Oh how this brings tears to my eyes!! such longing in this piece as well as love!! so beautifully expressed.. Something that my heart can relate to! Wonderful job!! thank you very much for sharing!!

    Angel

    • freespirit51
      August 26, 2008
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      Angelflower

      Thanks so much for your very wonderful words. I always give thanks to my inspiration, for my memories of him have inspired this piece as he has many others as well.

  • PureCountry
    August 25, 2008

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    Powerful Words of Reflection,

    of which I can understand greatly. The story that inspires, is one that grows in value with the passing of each day.

    Until that sweet day of reunion, may you continue to abide in the arms of peace from beyond.

    Niaish for sharing

    Silent Hawk

    • freespirit51
      August 25, 2008
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      Silent Hawk

      Thanks for reading my friend. Not much after a few weeks of contimplation, but it was a promise I made and had to keep.


  • lianonsidhe silver member
    August 25, 2008

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    So sweet!! Succinct and thought bound. I love the 'untold story' effect this write has. It draws you in but gives you feww clues, so your mind fills in the story around it. Super write. Thank you for sharing.


  • arafura gold member
    August 25, 2008
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    Beautiful my friend. Thanks for sharing.


    • freespirit51
      August 25, 2008
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      lianonsidhe

      Thanks for your generous words my friend. I always like to leave the reader wanting more.


    • freespirit51
      August 25, 2008
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      arafura

      thanks glad you enjoyed


  • Rose Angel gold member
    August 24, 2008

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    I need not ask who this is about dear sister. It was always understood! I do thank you for your memory of him, my special brother.An honor to be his sister, and I do love the way you have written this short but powerful write on your love and promise to him!Bravo!

    • freespirit51
      August 25, 2008
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      Rose Angel

      Thanks so much for gentle and kind words my sister. I had a promise I had to keep and you are right it was for him "as always".


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    August 24, 2008

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    Very beautiful, my sister...You have said so much about love in so few words...
    Take care...
    Much love and blessings,
    Nor


    • freespirit51
      August 25, 2008
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      Soulful Woman

      Thanks for your kind words my friend. I am glad you enjoyed this piece as it meant much to me to write.

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