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Rendezvous

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breath escapes in hunger
spread upon petals of want,
need thrusts ravishing desire
as we make love so passionately,

temptation fondles sweetness
dripping like honey from a flower,
swallowed in heated moments
of rapture's burning flame,

pleasure's tempo peaks
sighing foreplay's rendezvous,
driving against climatic breezes
     of a lover's euphoria

 

 

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Artist Credit-Grass Girl by Ms.Katherine Dinger
50 words

A contest entry

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  • individuality gold member
    August 17

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    a good poem, ah sweet love, the passionate wisps that slip from our spirits and then dance across breath released, and hearts beating in tune to soft sighs of warm happiness.


  • penman gold member
    September 3, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Oh my another fabulous creation. And so deserving of the silver. Congratulations.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    August 29, 2008

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    excellent~

    Ok
    Think I will turn up the A/C just a tad now...
    Sensual and passionate
    Of a lover's euphoria
    Congrats on the Silver Trophy
    You go girlfriend
    Hugs
    Your sis
    Susan~~~


  • StarEyes
    August 25, 2008

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    Sis,

    I think there is a fire on this page Where did I put that bucket of water? This is smokin' Girl! Wow! What a great job you did on this one!!! Hot stuff!!! Love it!

    Congrats on the Silver!!!

    and love

    Nyetta


    • Carolina Moon gold member
      August 25, 2008
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      I couldn't help myself I was already in the naughty corner so I thought, why not lol Thank you dear.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    August 25, 2008

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    Very sensual indeed!! Beautifully done sis! Definitely heating things up

    Congrats on the silver!


    • Carolina Moon gold member
      August 25, 2008
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      I haven't done much sensual writing lately, thought I'd lost my touch hehe Thank you sis!


  • JinSays gold member
    August 25, 2008

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    temptation fondles sweetness
    dripping like honey from a flower,
    swallowed in heated moments
    of rapture's burning flame,

    these words dripped. I mean DRIPPED off this page. Wow. smokin hot too. Right on, great entry, thank you,
    best wishes,
    Jin


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    August 25, 2008

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    Nice job. I think my own entry was far too literal. I need to get in touch with my emotions. Can you suggest a good yoga postion to sleep in? Something preferably that I can eventually get out of without surgery.

    Mike

    • Carolina Moon gold member
      August 25, 2008
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      LOL I'm not sure about that, every position I know of doesn't require surgery, but can be painful if done right LOL..


  • Rclane gold member
    August 24, 2008

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    Girl you've done yourself proud. I find no shame in your words but only the thirst of passion's desires satisfied in such a nicely penned work. Best to you in contest.


    • Carolina Moon gold member
      August 24, 2008
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      Aww aren't you sweet to say such nice things? Thank you. Now, if only it would come true!

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