Through these eyes
The world just isn't the same.
Blue skies are dark and disguised
And the water looks like flames.
White clouds disapear
They blend in with the darkness.
The skies aren't clear
But they are nontheless.
Through these eyes
The world is all dark,
Cheers become cries
And evil has left it's mark.
So I take off these glasses
And I forget what I saw.
Happiness in masses
And now the world has no flaws.
Author notes
this was fun to write. im glad i entered!
beautiful pic in contest by dolls-x-phoenixes
http://dolls-x-phoenixes.deviantart.com/art/Through-Tinted-Eyes-95055784
A contest entry
- How does that make you feel? [options] by written-in-ink.
600 points, ended September 7, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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so im not usually a fan of rhyme
but this was amazing
i think that ou caputred the pic very well
and i love where you took it
very nice good
thank you and good luck -
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heheheh
i commented twice
lol
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i really liked this!
Through these eyes
The world just isn't the same.
Blue skies are dark and disguised
And the water looks like flames.
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especially that stanza
it was beautiful, with wonderful imagery
best of luck in the contest
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wow
very nice
i dont like ryhme but i think that this was good rhyme.
all in all very nice!!!
thank you and good luck.
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