I know deep inside
Even though you deny
Your feelings havn't changed
Your thoughts are still the same
Thats why I can't let it go
My heart was broke
And inside it still hurts
I wish that i could love again
Like i did back then
Before you stole my life
Shattered all the dreams
Tore my heart, at the seams
Pleas just give me some time
To put things back together
You know I'm trying, to forget
Just remember that "I DO"
Really Love You
A contest entry
- Silly love songs by ml12.
550 points, ended November 15, 2008, 9 entries
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Apart from some missing letters this was pretty good. It was simple but I think you said what you needed to and there was a strong sense of longing and hurt coming through. Thank you for the emotion and the entry, cheers.
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