It's easy to loose one's reflection
When walking in the rain
A heart that was filled with love
Now is filled with so much pain
Words just tumble from my mouth
Trying to reach your heart and soul
But somehow my darling, they are lost
On ears that don't want to know
Why don't you let me love you
Open your heart and let my love in
Together you and I darling
Can have a new life, let us now begin
A contest entry
- Verse prompt - not a lyrics contest, just tell me what you feel. by Topaze.
800 points, ended September 7, 2008, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Say what you think
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Thank you so very kindly Karl for the Silver Trophy for my poem. Your comment was very touching. It was a joy to enter your contest. Katie
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Oh my Katie, aren't you the sweet one, words the ease the pains of the calloused hands, weathered and worn longing for love, beautiful. Thank you for your fine entry in this contest.
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The door that is knock at
not always will respond. What one does if the conection is no longer willing to be made. Don't stay out walking in the rain. I wonder why it is love is turned off- and who is to blame. With poetry we just change the heart and mind. In real life one goes just insane...mac
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Mac, thanks for your comment. I hope your love is not turned off. There is someone for you. If not then look for someone who will love you just for you. Katie
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Keep going insane mac, eventually you will hit the wall and realize life is more than your simple beliefs! my best wishes always
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