Bristled blades across porcelain
skin; I can smell her auburn hair
like roses in fields of sugarcane.
Pining like liquid fire through
my veins- if only my yearning fingertips
could stroke her gentle spine...
Green oceans surround, yet she spots me;
her simper is sunlight-
my heart the burning star.
Author notes
Grass Girl by Ms. Katherine Dinger
In a list
A contest entry
- Here it is, Some Sunday Afternoon Lovin...quickie anyone? by JinSays.
300 points, ended August 25, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Beautifully written and well deserving of the gold ~ congrats
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Spectacular
It is easy to see why you ran away with the gold in this contest. You did an absolutely awesome job.
Exquisite
Mike
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Yep, this is gorgeous. The mood is perfect, and she is sweet. I love this poem, and am impressed, thank you,
Jin -
oooh yes, this is lovely. Font is tiny, but I made it through. So much about this write, I'll come back,
jin
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