I never believed in fairytales
the impossible was just that.
I was never very religious
the clouds parting was never a sign.
So when you came to me
with no hesitation, no resentment
beleif arose.
You showed only kindness in the face of darkness
only gentilness when crises occured.
You guided me
helped me see the greatness in myself
and through your actions belief arose.
It didnt occured to me until now
a gift has been placed in my path.
Wrapped with strength and fun
passion and security
belief arose for my gardian angel.
Bad times are still to come
in this journey we call life.
But gardian angel
you watch over me
a key to heaven's gate.
Belief arose
and never shall it falter.
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Comments
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This is a really good piece but you need to go over it with a spell checker, there are many many mistakes in this. Best to you
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an amazing poem, i really love this!
great job
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