Silent waves brush against our skin as we reminiscence.
Irreplaceable days of innocent kisses and insignificant lies.
Moonlight plays a pattern upon our skin as we think of what we have become.
Photographs of sunflowers and silhouette dreams.
Lingering thoughts cloud our young minds.
Ever ever after they wish for a fairytale love with a obvious happy ending.
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Author notes
http://yestrdaysforgivn.deviantart.com/art/Simple-happiness-39598900
Figured id do an acrostic i havent done one in a while.
Sorry i have to get off the computer but ill post the rest when i sign back on.
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A contest entry
- This Is Me by Jasmine Rayne.
1100 points, ended August 30, 2008, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give Me Your Love! by SincerelyMegan.
575 points, ended September 14, 2008, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think of the title?
Comments
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You know, I really like how you worded this,
and how you ended it!
It's cute.
"Moonlight plays a pattern upon our skin as we think of what we have become."
I really like that line. -
Very short. Very sweet.
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I love this poem. A very beautiful write.
"Silent waves brush against our skin as we reminiscence.
Irreplaceable days of innocent kisses and insignificant lies."
I like these lines. They are a bit sad, but have that nostalgic sense of happiness behind them. :] Great.
"Photographs of sunflowers and silhouette dreams."
This touches my heart greatly. I love your word choice. Such beauty. ^_^ I loved your poem. Thank you very much for entering.
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I've been trying to finish it but my muse is away and writers block has taken her place
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