Florida Sunshine -
This poem's for you!
You look pleasant, a cheerful soul!
A 'shimmering elegance'
Reminds me of an Elephant
Because elephants make me giggle!
You're so cool Sunshine, you make my toes wiggle!
You're so hawt girl, you're sa-mokin'!
Guys walking by and they start chokin'
Cause of how you rollin'
You're patrollin'!
Now I know why Florida's so sunny,
Because you're smiles resides there, honey!
I don't know you but you look really nice,
Global warming is here 'cause you melt all the ice!
I see you like Haikus?
Well, I like the color blue!
What a coincidence!
I hope you like this poem Florida Sunshine!
I wrote it for you!
Author notes
I hope you like the poem I wrote for you!
A contest entry
- Laugh out Loud by Florida Sunshine.
525 points, ended September 12, 2008, 26 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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If you can't laugh at yourself, who 'can' you laugh at. ~ I found the rhyme was cleverly placed in the punchline. ~ I skipped through all the rest and picked this one first! You certainly make this 'memorable' ~ Nice job! You had me laughing out loud!
Best of luck in the contest...
Florida Sunshine
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