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hollow point words ricochet
and spill out their deadly thoughts
among the detritus of this soul
that knows no bounds
firebrand; liar; consort of thieves
how empty are these eyes
that see with such deadly intent
filled with self-loathing
and despise...

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dstreetpoet.... Amaranthine Lover

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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    October 8, 2008
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    I like the shortness of breath this gives to life


  • Topaze gold member
    August 24, 2008

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    A very well written piece, however I see no connection with the prompt. Thank you for your fine entry in this contest.