my soul once touched beautiful,
while my heart inhaled magic,
heaven danced in my smile
when you held me,
only the bluest skies embraced me
life swaying in unison with love,
romance lit up each heartbeat
never dulling in light of togetherness,
those feelings now dwell in past tense
swept away on winds of change,
yet, I still breathe those moments
as yesterday sashays across my mind,
if only tomorrow returned my heaven
when I felt moonlight in your kiss,
radiance of soul would live again
if you held me
Author notes
emo1-artist unknown
A contest entry
- PIF Pic prompt :Because I feel the need for another contest by Rclane.
475 points, ended September 7, 2008, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful
Such a well crafted poem. So perfect for the prompt. Best of luck in the contest.
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Much appreciated, thank you!
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Aww.. so beautifully sad! Those winds of change can be bitter!
Another stunning write!
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I found myself feeling this way during one of my emotional moments yesterday. And yep, winds of change are bitter at times, that's for sure. Thank you for the sweet comment sis!
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Sis,
Do I really need to say it again?
"those feelings now dwell in past tense
swept away on winds of change,
yet, I still breathe those moments
as yesterday sashays across my mind,
if only tomorrow returned my heaven
when I felt moonlight in your kiss,
radiance of soul would live again
if you held me"
That sounds like me, and my dreams..... *sigh* Oh i will have it someday....
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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Uh oh, I did it again didn't I?
Ok Ok, I'll go to the naughty corner
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Uh huh, you did..... you really have to find someone elses mind to probe for a while hehe...
I love it though!
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but but but
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Ok, you can probe my mind again, just let me finish the book please! I am on chap. 26 and if i keep going the way I am, I should be done sometime in the next two weeks.
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Thank you for your entry. It seems to often that our yesterdays overshadow our today's and deny us our tomorrows. Luck to you in contest.
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Thank you for silver. It was a pleasure writing for your contest.
Linda
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"Shasays across my mind"... what great phrasing... Love it! Your creativity amazes me and this is a wonderous write... great imagery and gentle touches... a wonderfull combination! Well done.
Ken
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Aww You are just so sweet. Thank you dear friend, that means alot to me.
(hope you are well)
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Good luck sis.
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Thank you sweetness..you should enter too! It's a great pic!
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