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In a grassy field

 

Enticingly cavorting on the grass
Displaying attributes all men admire
Curvaceousness and comeliness of arse
A countenance more radiant than fire

Our consumation lasted but an hour
Exhausting my reserves entirely
Exquitely resembling a flower
So I consumed her nectar avidly

An afternoon of overwelming bliss
My beautiful accomodating miss

Author notes

Written to a painting, "Grass Girl" by Ms. Katherine Dinger.

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  • Thomas Scott gold member
    August 25, 2008
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    In my picture you can't see her backside at all.

    Good stuff.
    Good luck in the contest.


  • JinSays gold member
    August 25, 2008

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    oooh, I'm scared of you!

    LOL
    Well alright then!
    I bet she never saw you coming.
    best wishes, you!

    Jin


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    August 25, 2008

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    "Curvaceousness and comeliness of arse" - Bro, that's like saying "willie" on TMS!

    I think this pitches in the rough and spins.N-1/2-B


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    August 24, 2008

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    Very interesting piece from you.
    Hmm all i can say i must of missed this dream
    and the thought of another there
    ah well cant have them all.

    this was awesome.

    Love
    Passions