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In a Quiet Room Far Away

To say something of near misses—
Lonely eyes and quiet kisses.

To see a clock—
Ticking like water
Lapping against a dock.

To see smiles, tears and smiles—
Mixed up in Memory’s files.

Where you were is where I am—
Concentric circling like an invisible man.

If presence is key,
Then what are we?

Eyes darting on a shadowed wall,
Or glass lovers running down parallel halls?

Perhaps the time difference says it all--
Although that was not my intention,
Maybe we simply missed the points of inflection.

But to tweak the misnomer,
A near-miss is in fact a near-hit--
Whose charted course no man can predict.

So hours and miles aside;
Emotion’s shapes may shift,
But passion will not subside.

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