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Don’t Like It Change It

AP is the same as in every day life
So listen here’s a little bit of sage advice
This site is “What you choose to make it”
Take a minute please, pull up a seat and sit

Listen, this is just between me and you
Where else can you tell adults what to do
You make the rules and DQ if you want
If you were mean, ridicule and taunt

Think about it having a contest is kind of fun
You choose the winners and it could be anyone
On the chatterbox you can talk to friends
Make new ones again and again

Think about it you could be the one to make it right
Be the shinning new star of poetry on tonight
Others could follow what you do here today
If you just stick it out, please don’t go away

Nothing will ever change it might depend on you
Make a difference show us old folks a thing or two
My advice to you is if you don't like this change this
The whole world is yours, you’re young rearrange it

Author notes

I hope you like it so you won't be tempted to eat my pants and I'm already bald. lol

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  • penman gold member
    August 31, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Congrats on the silver.


    • smonte19124 gold member
      August 31, 2008
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      Thank you very much for the kindness of your comments. God Bless


  • SmartBrick
    August 25, 2008

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    It reminded me of a rap!(This is a GOOD thing )Sorry about your hair!But you CAN keep you pants!I really liked it!


    • smonte19124 gold member
      August 25, 2008
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      Thank you very much for the comments and allowing me to keep the pants. God Bless, lol