Pure natural beauty,
Raven hair, luscious, devine;
She's as fresh as new mowed hay
And sweeter than nouveau wine.
Wind blows, softly rippling grass.
Tresses flutter in the breeze.
Her perfume wafts faintly past
Leaving me weak in the knees.
Author notes
Prompt: The painting is Grass Girl, artist is my (JinSay's) favorite of late, Ms. Katherine Dinger.
A contest entry
- Here it is, Some Sunday Afternoon Lovin...quickie anyone? by JinSays.
300 points, ended August 25, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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awww this is so epic and marvelous dear cousin I adore it.. veyr well done and nicely imagined! loved it!
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Thank you for reading and commenting. I am glad you enjoyed the poem.
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This is truly great
Its just perfect and you fooled me at first but on the second read I caught it .
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I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading and commenting.
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Superb
Ah, 'tis a fine romantic write, indeed. Imagery, rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us. -
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Thank you very much for reading and commenting. It is much appreciated.
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You are quite welcome.
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She's as fresh as new mowed hay
And sweeter than nouveau wine.
Excellent take my friend, as always thank you for entering, and best wishes to you,
jin
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Thanks. FYI - I dont do my best work on sweet prompts.
Thanks for holding the contest.
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Oh my Chucks, this is really great! Good luck big guy!
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Thanks. I appreciate you reading and commenting. I am not sure it meets the guidelines. but......
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Soft and Sensual
This is just a beautiful poem with great imagery and emotions that lie between the lines. Just a beautiful read and best of luck in the contest.
Many Blesssings
Kelle Marie
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Thank you for reading and commenting. I have a general problem with picture prompts, especially when the judge says dont tell me about the picture, tell me about your feelings.
I am not sure I did what was asked of me.
Mike
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