She sets upon the tall grass
with radiant black hair flowing,
her skin of soft petite pinks
yearn admiration,
I do wish to know her
a friend of casual lips
softly spoken
in the kindness she portrays,
lift from my emptiness
into your lush tall grass
of her earthly blossom
A contest entry
- Here it is, Some Sunday Afternoon Lovin...quickie anyone? by JinSays.
300 points, ended August 25, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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in the kindness she portrays,
lift from my emptiness
into your lush tall grass
of her earthly blossom
Very sweet, and your use of metaphor is lovely. Best wishes in this contest!
Jin
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I liked the poem, it was so interesting I had to check out the prompt. Beautiful photo. I love the softness this poem takes from it.
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