I swung through the air on a storm-colored zephyr
wondering when I’d arrive at the lights.
It took a few years but when your eyes found mine
the stars aligned in the sky.
So we raced through the clouds
on swings of love, like butterflies
deeply enthralled by love.
It wasn’t just kisses; but happiness as well.
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Comments
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"storm-colored zephyr"
i LIIIIKE.
a LOOTTTT.
even though im not 100% sure what a zephyr is..
CONGRATS ON THE BRONZE EMU
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So we raced through the clouds
on swings of love, like butterflies
deeply enthralled by love.
that was amazing
very good write!!!
loved it!!
thank you and good luck!
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