One night with you, I surrender,
let me rest upon your shoulder.
Palms sweat as you take my hand,
warmth flowing from head to toe.
Look of want in eyes, undeniable,
to please you is my one desire.
Fingertips and lips follow crevices,
soothing your soul with gentleness.
Satisfying, now the wait is over,
our first night takes our breath away.
Plunging deeper into our pleasure,
seductive, your weakness I find.
You rise with the moon in Heaven,
trembling, the stars burst in splendor.
A new dawning has now begun,
sunshine comes to welcome the day.
Our passion flows in the sunlight,
contentment peaks like morning dew.
Mingling bodies pressed together,
nothing could ever be more beautiful.
Author notes
Option #4 Sandygram
Missing the one in my heart and longing to be with him.
In a list
A contest entry
- Write What You Will! by limechic.
725 points, ended September 1, 2008, 62 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is so sensual and classy.. After being off for so long I knew the first of yours I clicked on would showcase you talent of getting a beautiful moment capture with sensuality with your classy touch. Always a pleasure.
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Thank You My Friend
Dear June, Always brings a smile to hear from you. You take care. Hugs ands Smiles.
Many Blessings,
Sandy
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beautiful sweet message
flows so good, lovely enjoyable read
I love how you can express how you miss our love with out whining.
keep up the great writing
Rhonda
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Good Morning!!
Thank you Rhonda. Always nice to have you drop by and read my poetry. Love your comments. Take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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Oh hun, my heart is warmed with this beautifully heartfelt poem
I just wanna hug you hun 
♥
Stay safe
Love to you
~Manda
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Lovely Coment
Good morning dear Amanda. Thank you for the sweet words this morning. I appreciate the much needed hug to.. I hope you and David have a wonderful day and the sun shines upon you. 
Bless You,
Sandy
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Aww this is so romantic, sensual, passionate...the first two lines and the last two seem to have the most impact on me
Great job, good luck in the contest!
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Great Coment
Thank you for stopping by and reading. I appreciate the nice comment.
Take care, Sandy
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Ah..I do agree ..do agree..do agree..a passionate and sweet poetry you wrote.....I love it..you did well in this verse..and my thanks for sharing it..
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Lovely Comment
Hello, It is always an honor when you stop by and read my poetry. Thank you for this most lovely comment. So glad you enjoyed reading it. You take care and have a beautiful blessed day.
Sandy
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As long as there is spring in our heart
The comforts of fall will never be to cool...mac
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Thank You Mac
Good morning dear friend. I hope this day finds you feeling well and smiling. The big yellow sun is ready to shine upon you today. Enjoy it with your loved ones.
Bless You Always,
Sandy
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This stirs emotion, passions and desire. This is wonderfully erotic, yet, simple to see, bodies pressed in shared moments of delight, trembling to cling as pleasures satisfied will return again. This is beautiful as the reader is taken into the most private place enjoyed as elation becomes afterglow.
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Good Morning Dan
I always enjoy your thoughts on my poetry. I am glad you enjoyed reading and it could stir emotion with the reader. You have a wonderful day dear friend. Hugs and Smiles.
Peace and Blessings.
Sandy
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