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A Night's Ending

Rich in appeal
resides Bourbon Street,
famous the world over.
Filled with jazz and
"loaded" bars, what
more could party hoppers
ask?
Right there on a corner
sits Clover Grill.
It boasts of great
down to earth hamburgers
and ice cold soda.
It's where you go to
settle the all night throttle.
Peace and quiet sounds delightful
topping off a great evening.

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Shancy Fayre

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  • artis
    September 4, 2008
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    A quiet shelter, to flee from the raccous, and comptemplate the night's revelry, you have touched on the reasons for these cafes that sit on many corners amidst the hubbub of

    a party town. great work.~~~Thanks for your entry~~~Artis


  • Solidified
    August 24, 2008

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    ahh what a nice take from the prompt, I felt compelled to check out this place because who the heck ever heard of "down to earth hamburgers" before. That's unique.