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Keep your children away
When I'm around
Don't let them play
Its plain as day
To see that
You better pray
Because
They won't stay safe for long
They will regret
Ever looking my way
First they will become disstant
than they will cry
Because they are so high
Soon you will notice cuts on their wrists
along with their morbidness
I'll kill them slowly
On the inside
The pain will work its way out
so keep them away
The last thing you'll notice
Is their own death

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  • Redeemed15
    August 24, 2008
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    Wow. Dark poem. What inspired this? I can't think of a title to offer. This is a great poem. I think you should be more consistent with the capitalization of the first of the line.


    • perfectdarkangel
      August 24, 2008
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      Theres no gothic/emo ppl at my new school and ppl come up to me and tell me that they would hang out with me if i didnt seem so evil so i wrote this.


      • Redeemed15
        August 24, 2008

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        I can't believe that. They should accept you the way you are. I can see why you would write something like this after that. I've done poems like this after something like that would happen. Well, even if they don't, I accept you the way you are.