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You're drunk dialing me
[again]
And I'm screening every call
Your number is burned into my memory
I hope that your calls are apologies
But I know they'll never be
[[ Some things just never change ]]
So, I just ignore the phone.

                                You're just not worth my pain



                       

 

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  • Timeless Wisdom silver member
    November 22, 2008
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    Hmm..a song comes to mind...and perhaps this can be your title: "Call Me When You're Sober" by Amy Lee (Evanescence).

    That song is so full of what I feel is the same message that is being sent here.

    Nicely Penned

    "Pick up the pen and never put it down again"
    ASM
    AKA Raymond


  • Nephlim
    September 10, 2008
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    Short, but there's a lot said and a story just waiting to unfold in the reader's imagination. ^-^ 'drunk dialing' is a neat phrase, and I like dit a lot . The conflicting emotions you portrayed here are really good too, the hope for a new beginning, but the realization that you have to move on.
    GREAT job
    diggin it majorly