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Honest Love

We've known each other since diapered behinds.

We've grown together, seen each others binds.

No quirks to dispel, we've already learned,
what makes us tick, what makes us squirm.
No fears are ours,

have no tails to hide
just love for each other,

taken forever in stride.

All that's left is our kiss of life

the unision of our bond of love.

 

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  • etoile
    August 26, 2008

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    this was nice!
    i liked the second half
    i like the form it's in
    it looks very pretty
    best of luck in the contest


  • Venugopal gold member
    August 24, 2008
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    nice poem indeed


  • written-in-ink
    August 24, 2008

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    i like it
    very nice take on the pic

    and so cute!

    one thing
    *we've
    [but who am i to say anythign i cant spell at all!]

    thank you and good luck!