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Solitude

The rush of distant traffic
fades to a hum beneath my thoughts.

Dogs at my feet, brush warm fur against my calves
as I walk;
I am aware of every step.

Evening light falls
through my window, creamy and dim,
laying in sweet pools across my kitchen.

My breath is gentle and comes in the rhythm of
some old, forgotten hymn.

Tasting the present rescues me from
time.

And all I feel is God.

M.A.King 2008

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  • hugh wyles silver member
    August 25, 2008

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    Dear Mary,

    If the Peace and Grace of God is upon you, you are blest beyond anything this world can offer. Rest in The Lord.

    Applause, love and hugs, XXX Hugh.


  • Samplette gold member
    August 24, 2008

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    Praise the Lord for resting in His peace. How awesome is that. Delighting in His presence. A beautiful write.
    Sam