Heart beating fast, wanting, needing.
Fear mixed with excitement....
Her lover moves in slowly, caresses,
stroking ribbons over her body.
Flesh tingling with ecstasy
until she can't take any more....
Author notes
The picture at the top is your picture prompt, I want to know how this picture makes you feel, I want metaphors and imagery!!
10 poets
20-30 words
24 hours
A contest entry
- PIF/QUICKIE - picture prompt by OnceUponAMind.
490 points, ended August 25, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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well
again what could I possibly know? I remember when I thought it was good sex. even read... Masters & Johnsons " The Joy of Sex " But to late to learn now. enjoy. Your in your greatest prime. Opps how would i dare know that? lol
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You peeked at my age, that's how!
Naughty boy! lol Good sex, what's that? Last time I remember it, the batteries ran out!
xoxo
KJ
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Very Good
You did well to match the picture
I looked at the contest
Well done
Too bad you could not write further
Rick
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Thank you, Rick! I think maybe if I could have used more than 30 words I may have written this better.
I apologize for not responding earlier, I was away for Thanksgiving and other things came up. I haven't written anything lately, I've been having a hard time trying to think of ways to express myself.
xoxo
KJ
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Ew! Heavy sigh
What more can I say? Ew!
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Ahhhmazing! I like where you took this! The first entry I've read so far that went in this 'seductive' direction
Nice take!
Amber
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lol
kidding too
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awww very erotic! I got excited just reading it. Must try that with my husband.
Her lover moves in slowly, caresses,
stroking ribbons over her body.
oh if you were talking about the xx and oo 's its okay i do that too sometimes. lol
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Oh, well, then xoxo's for you too!
I think I'd love to be a fly on your wall! If you two would like a 3rd, let me know! I'm just kidding! LOL
You two have fun, I'll just continue daydreaming. *Sigh*
xoxo
KJ
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oh wow, this was quite steamy! nice take on the prompt.
best wishes~
tim
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LOL! Thank you! I guess it's been a while, the photo made my mind wander.
xoxo
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that's alright...gave me ideas to use with my wife!
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LOL
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