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Moon Light

Staring at the city

from the roof top

the lights brightens the night

as if it were day

 

Your looking deeply in my eyes

telling me things i've already knew

I keep listening to your sweet voice

just waiting for our lips to meet

under the moon light 

 

We dance to music

only our ears can hear

and embrace in passionate kisses

 

Hearing a loud buzz

I awake with a startle

and think

darn it was only a dream  

 

Author notes

My user name is swtnsxy
My muse to write this poem was i have always dreamed to dance with my lover on the top of a building over looking a beautiful city the dream keeps playing in my head and it has yet to become reality. It will someday come true i like to believe anyway.

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  • tatteredheart..
    August 25, 2008

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    Dreams do come true!!After 20 years I can be kissed in the rain, you will get to dance on a rooftop!!

  • limechic
    August 24, 2008

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    *Sigh*...it IS a nice dream isn't it? I've dreamt of this too...keep on dreaming, I think it will come true for you too!

    Great job, good luck in the contest!