From life of moral loss
Society plays this game
Where outwardly forbidden
To say Your holy name.
What love could be more pure,
More faithful, more unique
Than for our God to send His son
In time where much was bleak?
What gift could be more grand
Than to give His own?
What love could be more honest?
How better to be shown?
To bring us out of sin,
To cast out Satan's snare
What love could be more true
Than this He gave to share?
Author notes
I'm not too sure how this will play in your contest. I did indicate that it was # 3 in the title, however I also thought I'd mention it here. Enjoy!
Written January 16th, 2004
A contest entry
- 4 Choices=) Come check it out! by mendee86.
310 points, ended January 19, 2004, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Hey, nice job on this peice
Good flow and rhyming. Keep up the good work.
-Ash,
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Doh.. >.<
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Hey=) Thank you for entering my contest=) Just found a slight mistake (yes I know I'm picky..) 2nd stanza 3rd line you need to capitilize 'Then our God to send His Son" because they're all refering back to God, or Christ
Great job rhyming! This is exactly what I was looking for - thank you! Good luck!
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