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Our Thoughts Are Often Beyond Grasp

I so love music and the nature of the world,
my heart goes out to the hobo who was once a polished pearl.
Never does my mind stop except where trees are near,
A place where old souls reside as  I relate to fear.

Time never stands still my mind wears me down,
I wear what I feel for the day like a new actress in town.
Be it dressy or hippie oh yes I reside within,
and often if you look close I wear a wicked grin.

My destiny was written a life lost in time,
my heart is huge but watch me for I will turn on a dime.
For within this mind lives another often in the lead,
so either love us both or please leave.

I change not for anyone unique I shall stay,
for within this life its a challenge everyday.
So many never see my wings for the darkness prevails,
yet I know they are their yet often restricted within this cell.

The whispers that drift upon the wind,
often pulls me into the dark.
A place were such horrors I take part,
Yet again with the blink of an eye the child turns to be.
and it's a time of peace I find inside of me,

The place where my wings are held such an embrace ,
and it hugs me tightly when I so need they come to play.
To protect me and help me grow each day,
within this forest they call life to find my way.


Author notes

We all wear our lives out in the open for all to see without a word spoken they feel they know me . I refuse to hear them talking for how could they know yet so aware I wear it for all to see everywhere I go . Their are no secrets for their are those about that feels your fear and your screams of horror even in the silence about . You are never alone

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  • Francis Vincent
    September 3, 2008

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    good job

    best read a second time
    lots of good imagery
    but
    the real story untold
    is that lucky guy in the pic next to you

  • Francis Vincent
    August 26, 2008
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    good job

    liked it


  • Subtle Rains
    August 25, 2008
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    you write these words as if written by myself. i can truly relate.


  • liduen silver member
    August 24, 2008

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    This is beautiful...my mouth is pratically hanging open in amazment.

    The place where my wings are held such an embrace
    and it hugs me tightly when I so need the come to play.
    To protect me and help me grow each day,
    within this forest the call life to find my way

    That is so beautiful...especially the last line. This whole poem is so true, delicate and absolutley wonderful. Good luck in the contest!


  • Akari
    August 24, 2008
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    WOW

    Absolutely besutiful. you did a wondrful job witht this... keep up the good work.


  • written-in-ink
    August 24, 2008
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    WOW

    this was amazing!


    My destiny was written a life lost in time,
    my heart is huge but watch me for I will turn on a dime.
    For within this mind lives another often in the lead,
    so either love us both or please leave.


    gah i loved that


    i love this poem!!!

    very nice job!

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