Our love crashed like oceans roaring for the others soul
as life soared in silence between sepia fragments.
We sat holding hands and falling
in each others eyes
wishing on the clouds,
in our imagination
where it wrote our names in the sky.
and while life was swinging bye
time took vacation, as we collided in forever's arms
sharing a kiss of a lifetime.
Author notes
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prompt:http://media.photobucket.com/image/love/mirandabri08/__-.jpg?o=34
A contest entry
- reserve! by written-in-ink.
900 points, ended August 28, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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HOODWINKED!
A beautiful poem of a tender moment of endearment. The simplicity and spontaneity of this kiss and the shared feelings make this so special. You have employed good imagery in this poem. Well Done!
You have been Hoodwinked by the Poetic Bandits today because WE CARE!
Dennis
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My favorite!
I love this poem! NO wonder you were the Gold trophy winner Luna! The picture and words flow so easily. I love the way you write! I'm a fan!
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wow this was amazing!
Our love crashed like oceans roaring for the others soul
as life soared in silence between sepia fragments.
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i LOVED that
and every other word in this poem.
this was absolutely brilliant
youre def winning something
i loved it. <3
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Awww
I adore this. So cute... and can relate to it greatly right now I love your use of words and flawless flow. Excellent write, keep it up!
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Nice
beautiful imagery I have no points left otherwise you would get applause -
Very pretty thoughts to the picture, looks like a first love and they always seems so innocent but they end and life goes on eh!!! Getting wistful now
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very good job!!!
We sat holding hands and falling
in each others eyes
wishing on the clouds,
in our imagination
where it wrote our names in the sky.
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my fav part
you did a good job!
thank you
and good luck!
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Awwww I think you did a nice job here darling I love it goodluck in the contest best wishes and much love always
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This was fantastic. Loved it, YAY
Mummy, xoxox
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