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games we play

your words wrap
themselves around
my limbs

make me a prisoner
in my own head

I twist and tangle

a knot of
anticipation

that you
unravel




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  • OnceUponAMind silver member
    August 25, 2008

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    Interesting thoughts here! You've taken this in a direction I could see myself going as well!
    "I twist and tangle

    a knot of
    anticipation

    that you
    unravel"

    Great job! Amber