Ribbons
fell from the sky
Anonymous,
pastels waved goodbye
Incentives
falling before my eyes
Neon
kite-tails and butterflies
Yesterday's
fleeting little lies
Author notes
Prompt: Picture Prompt (20-30 words)
A contest entry
- PIF/QUICKIE - picture prompt by OnceUponAMind.
490 points, ended August 25, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wonderful!! you did such a great job! it flowed so effortlessly!! very deserving of the silver! I truly loved this piece!
Angel
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Ahhh, love this write packed with metaphors and amazing imagery! "Neon kite-tails and butterflies, Yesterdays fleeting little lies"... Also love the acrostic form, they are one of my favorites
Amber
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To be tied in ribbons waiting, what a delicious thought
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Hmmm
So simple in grace, great ribbons and CAPITOLS all tied together-wow A visual and word delight, Hmmm!
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Oh, how pretty! I loved this! Good luck in the contest!
xoxo
KJ
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Good imagery! I like the form also very pretty!
Great work
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very cool, acrostic and rhymes! i found the words interesting, with the clincher being yesterday's fleeting little lies...nicely done.
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