I wanted to write a letter to you,
Cause I got more to say than I love you”.
All I have to say is…
only to you...
But that’s lots more than I love you!
I tried luring the breeze,
But they might whisper to the trees.
Blew a kiss into the air,
To find it return back to me,
A lil drop of rain dream,
It dint reach you…
So I wanted to a write a letter to you,
Cause I got more to say than I love you.
All I have to say is…
only to you…
But that’s lots more than I love you!
Would you gape at the sky?
Then you might find a lost petite star,
Away from all worldly war!
It’s just my heart filled with hope.
Would you stare at me!
Then the clouds might tramp me,
I would not see you….
So I wanted to a write a letter to you,
Cause I got more to say than I love you.
All I have to say is…
only to you…
But that’s lots more than I love you!
Author notes
33. Write me a love poem. Something beautiful, not overly sappy.
A contest entry
- 36 Options Contest! by chasingwhiterabbits.
700 points, ended September 3, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is an interesting poem; I like it quite a lot actually.
I tried luring the breeze,
But they might whisper to the trees.
That's my favorite part. Beautiful. Good luck in the contest.
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