Mother, proud Mother
Matriarch of I, abomination
The sorcerous enthraller
Who sacrificed her soul to sin
Subduer of the wizard guardian
To steal the seed of power stolen from you
Letting your vengence grow ripe within
Till fruit was bore of eminence anew
I, cursed am I
Birthed & forged the tip of Mothers hate
Bred in treachery & lie
A bastard pawn to blindly vindicate
A crown of thorns, callous & barbed
Hailed to the world my accession
Upon my head usurpation was charged
To herald rightful bloods reascension
Father! Hated Father!
Bane of my incestual creation
Blood of the betrayer
Let death sever our relation
Oh how my blade doth bade
To quell this ravenous wrath
With annihilation, our debts be paid
As the wind echoes with Mothers laugh
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WOOOOW... and i love this.. "let death serve our relation" -- i love that... a lot. -marrys the words- wow. well anyways... brilliance.
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Whilst everbody is writting about wizards and sparkely vampires (What?!) im writting about poor misbegotten Mordred of Arthurian legend
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ahhah, but its so much better than the vampire shit -pukes thinking about it -
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Ha! Thanks.
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Bravo
"A crown of thorns, callous & barbed
Hailed to the world my accession
Upon my head usurpation was charged
To herald rightful bloods reascension"
compliments arent enough here. -T
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youve conjuered up a great image....what times they would have been to live......off with his head...lol
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you are blowing me away I can't stop reading you have a ton of great stuff here.
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proud Mother, cursed I, hated Father .... wow, where is this all coming from??!
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This is based on the life of Mordred, King Arthurs bastard son.
His mother ( Morgan) was Arthurs sister, whom she bespelled to have a child with her to be the heir to the kingdom that would have been hers.
Pretty much, he was born a pawn for revenge and nothing more.
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Wow, such raw emotion! It could almost have been Hamlet speaking here ( although Hamlet despised Claudius, not his own dad ). It truly portrays the betrayal, horror and obsession that is felt.
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GAH! you're style reminds me of some of the greats and honestly I'm not making that up. The language, the imagery all top notch and as I was reading i felt like i was in a very dark scene with the fantasy touch just watching it all happen. Really amazing read.
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GAH! is right...greats, ha, I think not, but thanks for the read and delightful praise
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Wow this is great. Very dark, has a nice vocabulary to it. Now..I think I'm going to read it a second time lol.
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A second time, ha, I know its not that good
Have you any idea what story this is based on?
Im in a canrni mood, i'll give ya a hundred points if ya guess right
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You have a seriously amazing talent...your poems are all so...I can't think of the word at the moment...but wow!
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Thanks.
I think the worldyou're looking for is "crazish"
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wooow
very well written and very deeep as always it full of sadness andemotions...but i liked it very much!well done my friend
juliet
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